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Building Castles In the Sky

Sing to me that song again That builds a castle in the sky Where everything is shining There are no tears to cry Glistening waterfalls, Golden rocks in the walls Soft colorful carpets Match stained glass windows With balconies outside To see the landscape below Sing to me that song again That builds a castle in the sky With beautiful spiral staircases A white baby grand piano Playing this soft lullaby Where there is no pain at all Nothing but love fills every room Fresh fruit shines on the counter Tiled floor looks like the sea The sweet scent of roses in the air Please sing this lullaby to me So I can close my eyes to calmly rest On top of floating cushions in a dream Of this magnificent castle in the sky Heidi Sands *Placed 8th in Contest: Building Castles in the sky

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Date: 8/10/2017 9:28:00 AM
Beautifully penned Heidi...enjoyed..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/10/2017 6:57:00 PM
Thank you Joseph. I am happy you enjoyed this one that you found :)
Date: 1/5/2017 8:49:00 AM
Very good. Congratulations on your win, Kai
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/5/2017 2:06:00 PM
Thank you Kai . :)
Date: 1/4/2017 6:36:00 PM
So lovely and well-written, Heidi. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/5/2017 7:31:00 AM
Thanks , Sandra. :)
Date: 1/4/2017 2:27:00 PM
I like your style it flows like a river, easy to read x I give it 10/10 x They dont have to be long only to touch the soul x
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/4/2017 2:29:00 PM
Hi Wendy! That is so nice of you to tell me. Thank you very much for this visit and feedback . I appreciate it :)
Date: 1/4/2017 8:10:00 AM
I love your castle, Heidi, congratulations on your win :-)Hugs Eve
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/4/2017 8:25:00 AM
Thank you Eve! Happy you like it:)
Date: 1/3/2017 4:56:00 PM
Great poem Heidi! Congrats on your win! :-)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/4/2017 7:31:00 AM
Thank you Mark! :)
Date: 11/7/2016 3:33:00 PM
Beautifully written poem, Heidi. Great title as well. You paint such a lovely picture w/your words. Love always.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/7/2016 3:40:00 PM
Hi Freddie. Thank you - I don't get credit for the title though, as it was for the Contest already named that. :)
Date: 11/7/2016 8:42:00 AM
Great write depicting what Heaven would be like! G/L in the contest!:)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/7/2016 3:40:00 PM
Thank you Cheryl! :)
Date: 11/6/2016 9:54:00 AM
I admire your castle built in the sky. Nice Piece
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/6/2016 11:29:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 11/6/2016 8:46:00 AM
Beautiful! I love it.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/6/2016 11:29:00 AM
Great! Thank you

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