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Bud's Big Gamble

Bud limped to the drugstore to buy needed meds Instead of his drugs, he bought tickets instead His tickets had won!!! TWO MILLION the sum!!!! Such a shame he can't spend it, now that he's dead!!!
For Susan Burch's Contest: Lottery Tickets

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/16/2012 7:40:00 PM
Congrats, Carrie. Good one. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 1/16/2012 3:03:00 PM
How true! You can't take it with you. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/16/2012 11:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan Burch's "Lottery Ticket Limerick" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2012 7:20:00 AM
congratulations
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Date: 1/16/2012 5:39:00 AM
what a punchline, carrie.. sweet congrats! :) huggs
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Date: 1/16/2012 1:44:00 AM
Carrie congrats on your win..David
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Date: 1/15/2012 10:52:00 PM
CARRIE,,,, a wonderful win in Susan's contest ;-) congratulations, on a poem well done,..always yours one and only,..p.d.
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Date: 1/15/2012 4:11:00 PM
congrats, CArrie on a big win. It was meant to be!!
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Date: 1/15/2012 1:57:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your win. Elizabeth
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Date: 1/15/2012 12:37:00 PM
congrats Carrie on a sweet success in lottery contest with excellent Limerick..
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Date: 1/13/2012 6:31:00 PM
hahaha, Carrie, you should read mine. It's similar theme to yours!!
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Date: 1/12/2012 7:33:00 PM
Bud won, but he still lost. His heirs are going to have to pay some hefty taxes on that sum. Good write.
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Date: 1/8/2012 10:02:00 PM
Funny. I'll bet Bud's got heirs. "Where there's a will there are relatives."
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Date: 1/8/2012 9:54:00 PM
Oh that is just hilarious Carrie! Probably the funniest of all the "Lottery Tickets" limericks that I've seen so far! You did excellent! Great Work!!
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Date: 1/8/2012 7:09:00 PM
Now that's funny!!
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