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Budding Beauty Burning

Blue bonnie budding beauty burn Ready to receive fluttering butterflies Breathing heavy heart not seen Glittering dew drops signify all. +++++++ July 27, 2014 Form:Jue Ju Dr. Ram Mehta Eighth Place Win Contest: The Passion in A Jue Ju by nette onclaud

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Fabiyas M V
Date: 8/7/2014 10:46:00 AM
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Beautifully penned piece,Dr.Ram.Congratulations!
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Casarah Nance
Date: 8/5/2014 6:06:00 PM
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Your alliterations are spot on, and your performance is great, well done making it onto Nette's winners list! Many happy smiles :)
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/4/2014 9:02:00 PM
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I like this one. Big congrats on your win!!
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David Mohn
Date: 8/4/2014 7:13:00 PM
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Congrats to you Dr. Ram...nicely written
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/4/2014 4:45:00 PM
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good to see this on the list,Dr. Ram. BIG congrats for your win.
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Paul Callus
Date: 8/4/2014 11:28:00 AM
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Attracted by the "Breathing heavy heart" and alliteration. Congratulations on your win DR. // paul
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 8/4/2014 10:08:00 AM
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Dr. Ram, congrats for a very fine Jue ju. Mohan
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/4/2014 7:42:00 AM
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Very wonderful Dr Ram! Congrats on big win!
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/4/2014 4:42:00 AM
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wow wonderful alliteration Dr Mehta:-) just dropping by with my congratulations. Hugs Jan xx
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Anna-Marie Docherty
Date: 7/28/2014 8:31:00 AM
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Wow, Dr Mehta - this poem comes alive with the senses. Few words but wild as! Well done...
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/27/2014 5:13:00 PM
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NIce one for alliteration, Dr. Ram. It's a pretty poem.
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/27/2014 2:43:00 PM
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I love the alliteration....Tim
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/27/2014 9:01:00 AM
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Perfect Jue Ju Dr Ram! Gl in contest!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 7/27/2014 6:10:00 AM
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Beautifully written with great alliteration, Dr. Ram. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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