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Budding Beauty

For a date at eight she bathes at five. In tons of bubble bath, Barricades her boudoir door, Eau de cologne marks her path! Her lingerie must be 'just so', A froth of frills and lace. Down with the curlers, up with the hose, The womanly task of 'fixing her face'! Donning a frock spun out of dreams, With a skirt to swish and sway. Into the slippers, shining and new. Did Cinderella feel this way? What gala affair now summons our queen, Embassy tea or debutante ball? Oh no! It's a matter of much more import! Her very first date awaits in the hall! Composed by my wife, Vera Selena (Osburn) Hinshaw © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 5/20/2012 2:02:00 PM
Dear Bob, please tell Vera how much I enjoyed this poem. Men act spontaneously and sometimes decide they want to go out very quickly. Unfortunately, it takes more than an hour for my hair to dry, a good 45 minutes to shower and shave my legs before "putting on my face." This is so true! And I'm glad a woman wrote it! Love to you and Vera, Carolyn
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Date: 5/20/2012 9:37:00 AM
She was probably waiting for you Bob; how exciting and the preparations brought back memories.
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Date: 5/19/2012 6:01:00 PM
Marvelous and delightful....can feel your wife's excitement in her words....well done! Will we be seeing more of her work?
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Date: 5/19/2012 11:05:00 AM
Wonderful. Caught the night just right.
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Date: 5/19/2012 9:33:00 AM
This is great! I know how very difficult this poem must have been with rhyming abab in each verse. I have tried it but, yes, it was hard. Congratulate your wife Robert.
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Date: 5/18/2012 3:17:00 PM
This is good. I was thinking - he really knows about women. Tell your wife, she writes good, but she needs to write more. Have a great day. Lucilla
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Date: 5/18/2012 3:03:00 PM
a charming poem, but i'm a bit relieved that you didn't write it, bob! it didn't seem to be quite your style or subject matter. it's so nice to see that you and your wife have the writing bug in common. bravo to you both!
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