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Buddies

Little Miss Katie reached for her teddy soon as she was bathed and ready She lovingly named it Mr Freddie For cuddles and hugs,it was greedy so the furry whispered to the li'l lady a secret dialect, so soft and steady flowing from eyes, brown and beady Written 05/23/2016 Picture#3

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Sandra Haight

Date: 5/24/2016 9:26:00 AM

A very cute monorhyme poem for that picture, Sara. I love... "the furry whispered to the little lady...a secret dialect...." I think that Laura will love it. Hugs, Sandra P.S. You might want to change your choice of Form from Rhyme to Monorhyme :)

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 5/24/2016 9:31:00 AM

Oops, thanks Sandra!Changed the Form:)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/23/2016 5:22:00 PM

this is cute Sara I must have a look at the contests am pretty busy with life and work at the moment:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 5/24/2016 8:53:00 AM

Thanks Jan,these contests close so fast,I cant keep up with them too!