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Buckle Up

One man one woman
Upon a horse they did ride
Till off it she slid

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  1. Date: 5/17/2015 6:39:00 PM
    To much of the saddle soap 'no doubt' enjoyed this slippery tale Carol, all the best Joe..'

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 10:02:00 AM
    Love it :-)

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 3:17:00 PM
    so funny! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 3:33:00 PM
    the horse did glide, no his name wasn't El Cid.... sorry Carol just playing... Well done here, love it ....Don

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 6:48:00 AM
    the very first rhyme I ever learned was called "BUCKLE UP"....way back in preschool or Kindergarten! I hope u come back! I diGG your stuff!

  1. Date: 1/9/2012 1:24:00 PM
    Did she survive the fall? LOL!!...Milt

  1. Date: 1/9/2012 7:56:00 AM
    very cute! Kathy

  1. Date: 1/6/2012 1:41:00 PM
    when i was 4 years old i stole a horse named bj in alaska and rode him through the forrest the horse finally brought me home. i dont know if i stole him or he stole me =)

  1. Date: 1/4/2012 3:02:00 PM
    LOL, what a sense of humour you've got, Carol. Thanks for all your sweet comments x

  1. Date: 12/29/2011 7:08:00 AM
    It is fantastic,Carol.You have knitted the words very well.Thank you for all the nice comments on my poems.

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 3:47:00 AM
    Hahaha, Carol! Didn't had a horse ride for many years, but once I enjoyed a trip on horseback for a week in Chile. Nicely written Senryu!...Love, Gert

  1. Date: 12/23/2011 1:36:00 PM
    Good to hear Im not the only one sliding of horses:) Thanks for giving me a

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 5:51:00 PM
    Cute..Got a chuckle..Just what I needed..Sad though also..I hope she was okay..It reminded me when my children were young and we got them a small horse..She would head to the nearest limb and knock them off..She didn't stay with us long..Thanks for stopping by, reading and commenting on my work..Your comments were uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 12:58:00 PM
    Ahh the truth & farce of life,,,in counterpoint to intent and expectations Carol,, just what happens is what will be..)

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 8:45:00 AM
    Enjoyed it..Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, jag

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 6:29:00 AM
    Absolute truth of human life, where cordial relationship exists. ".....Till off it she slid". Really practically happens. Thanks, bl

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 3:34:00 AM
    HAHA What a rude end to a nice ride. He should have told her it was eimportant to hang on tight and try to keep her balance. Cute picture you describe here. Maybe he shouldn't have trotted the horse. God Bless, JB ;)

  1. Date: 12/21/2011 11:21:00 PM
    Smile ˜ Tis somewhat of a mystery as unto exactly how and perhaps why her loveliness I Am certain, slid from the moment, my dear precious Carol ˜ Either or hopefully for all concerned alls well that ends well ˜ Thank you for the sweet kind visit ˜ Merry Christmas ˜ My love to you & yours, always, John!:) ˜

  1. Date: 12/21/2011 6:05:00 PM
    Cool Carol, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 12/21/2011 5:43:00 PM
    Nice poem. Thank you for reading mine.