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With years of practice writing Haiku, Renku (and prose) poetry, I feel as though I have acquired some skill. Because that is what it takes, practice.  The more you do anything the better you become. This my first attempt, ever, at 'rhyming poetry'.  For two consecutive mornings I had lain in my bed, between that creative space of half-sleep and wakefulness.  The poem swirling around and around until it distilled to this and I had to write it down. (for better or for worse.)

The biggest reason that “rhyming poetry” has fallen out of favor is that it is often forced and unnatural. ... To the ear, it will sound more like internal rhyme (but to the eye it will appear as some form of end rhyme). In a good rhyming poem, the reader might not even realize it is rhyming poem (until later).  (Unknown. From the Internet.)      If I accomplished this, dear reader, it was by pure accident. 

The title: A young country-western song writer made up this term and it caught my fancy.  She meant it as a name for the groupies that follow the rodeo and its cowboys.

Another pair of cowboy boots beneath my bed banishing dreams of a permanent man right out of my head They call me a buckle-bunny but that sets too low the bar for at the end of the night I take home the rodeo star He rides wild horses and even wilder bulls I lap him up by the mouthfuls Lust curls in my belly when I spy the champion buckle his laughter is sweet as the honeysuckle An aging buckle-bunny is what I see until the next cowboy smiles at me

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Date: 8/12/2023 1:27:00 PM
A wonderful/fun write. I really enjoyed this fun write. Have a fun/great day writing away.............
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Date: 7/31/2023 4:22:00 PM
Terrific writing! Your Haiku's celebrate unbridled passion. I enjoyed your lusty verse, a kinda rodeo romp. Be well. Brian
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Date: 3/10/2022 12:02:00 PM
I agree that rhyme should not be forced. One should read over and over again out loud. If it doesn’t sound right it doesn’t work. Great writing and title.
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