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Brushstrokes Freeze

..,..,…,…,.,..,..,.. An artist would find hard to draw The shape of mountain without flaw As brushstrokes freeze in nature’s awe ©all rights reserved * Triplet is a three-lined poem that rhymes. Each line has the same number of syllables. ©all rights reserved .......................... For Brian Strand's TRIPLET By: nette onclaud

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2011 8:23:00 PM

Nette,just going thru the winners' list of this contest and saw how well you did. Congratulations. Well deserved. ARe you going to be back here now a lot more? (have you seen Constance? I bet she is really involved in that new website, huh?)

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/8/2011 3:14:00 PM

Nice triplet, Nette. Congrats on your win! Kim

David Williams

Date: 12/7/2011 11:59:00 AM

Nette congrats on your superb win..David

Cory Long

Date: 12/7/2011 11:45:00 AM

congrats on your win nette. cory

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2011 11:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Triplet" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 12/7/2011 10:01:00 AM

Hoorrayy Nette on your win.Very nice poem.

Nick Bagnall

Date: 8/17/2011 7:30:00 AM

A very pleasant read, rolls off the toungue easily, enjoyed.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/16/2011 7:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Triplet" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Sidney Beck

Date: 8/16/2011 2:12:00 AM

ok well done Young N.................you beat me by two-and-a-half centimetres in the list.......by the way, tea helps nostalgia everywhere in my humble opin......also by the way I absolutely detest Earl Grey tea, although I love many teas.....ok keep on keepin on Netski.....best wishes K

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/15/2011 11:18:00 PM

Congrats Nette luv on sweet success with new form in this contest filled with expressive words luv..

John Freeman

Date: 8/15/2011 11:17:00 PM

Excellent job Nette in writing skills.Great to see your poem honored. Great to see your worthy poem honored. Way to Go! Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/15/2011 9:28:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in my contest, nette

Kash Poet

Date: 8/15/2011 6:49:00 AM

Another gem from you Nette.Best wishes.

John Freeman

Date: 8/14/2011 10:28:00 PM

Neat flowing triplets Nette, Good luck in Dr Ram's Contest...thanks also for the place in your previous contest..I'm honored. I have to check out your other contest. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/14/2011 10:13:00 PM

a very soothing write, Nette!! Hey, My Penny poem was for your contest,right? I am seeing congrats on my win. So thanks for the win, sweetie. I hope you do well with these two pretty triplets for Dr. Ram. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/14/2011 9:11:00 PM

Thanks for the entry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/14/2011 5:31:00 PM

Nette luv just entered your newest contest.. no Shardoma listed on PS forms so I put mine under Verse.. do u prefer another form for this contest luv?

Nette Onclaud
Date: 8/15/2011 1:52:00 AM

my mistake.. was rushing the contest page as soup shuts down without notice.. it;s a shadorma, sweets! corrected it already...:) huggs

Constance La France

Date: 8/14/2011 5:06:00 PM

Very beautiful nette, best of luck with this lovely poem and thanks so much for my 2nd place win in your, In the Afterglow contest, I am very honored and proud~~

Joe Maverick

Date: 8/14/2011 5:04:00 PM

Quite intresting and rather cryptic Nette, wishing your poem does well in the contest...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/14/2011 4:44:00 PM

sweetly eloquent lines of tasteful elegance Nette luv.. good luck in the contest with this winning wonder.. earl gray is OK but I prefer Ceylon Orange Pekoe.. so soothing.. our power just returned after all night blackout from horrible storms and so much rain today no one allowed in ocean or on boats either.. no beach for Venus and I today..so sad..but power is on again..yeah..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/14/2011 1:41:00 PM

Ok I am on dense mode here, so this is some sort of lea leaf reading? Sorry never tried that before-- very interesting take on the triplets form :) I wonder what those blank spaces mean, sounds scary for her...btw, sorry I missed entering my poem in your contest (galing timing eh, nawala connection ko kagabi grr)-- but it was fun writing for it :) wish you the best in judging, Nette! hugs :D

Cory Long

Date: 8/14/2011 1:11:00 PM

this was awesome good luck in the contest cory

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/14/2011 7:11:00 AM

This is a great example of this poetic form! You wrote it with such power and warmth! Wonderfully done!!

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 8/14/2011 6:57:00 AM

warmth fill empty hearts as eyes fill your blank space~~~LOL~~~hehehehehe*-* great triplet....smile for this amazing entry~~~~junjun*-*

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/14/2011 6:32:00 AM

thank you Nette, how are you? as for me i am very glad to be here tonight,,, bumping in to you... bump~bump...lol... by the way a very great poem.. deep~ without a breeze. take care,..p.d.