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Brushstroke

You make me anticipate pleasure; while you glide across the floor. I observe your elegant contours, your elbows, and more… Your pale eyelids, marked eyelashes like a skilful ink stroke. You glance in my direction- I return a smile.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/4/2012 9:43:00 AM
The images are so strong. You are a master of the pen...
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Date: 11/12/2011 7:02:00 PM
David, everything sounds set... i love the way love hits in this picture..Enjoyed.... Have yourself a wonderful night..Thank you for sharing your interesting thoughts and words. Take care ;-) ..LINDA
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