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Brushed Strokes

BRUSHED STROKES ~ ~ ~ ~
sunrise reflects liquid eyes on aqua streams bathing wayfarers dipped in crystal nooks, as grains of ivory sand sift human dreams a corinthian-like scene taken from sacred books splashing brushed strokes with coral strain this river stencils a tranquil roam, blessed oath of a sweet virtue remains curling soft surf, she becomes home.
copyright © ~ ~ ~ ~ Contest: Brian Strand's POETA... max 15 Lines By: nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/11/2011 4:19:00 AM
Congratulations on the 1st Place win Nette in Brian Strand's "Poeta" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/9/2011 10:53:00 PM
A lilting and lovely poem nette...congratulations on your win today. Love, Bea
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Date: 7/9/2011 6:31:00 PM
just a pleasure for the mouth to say! Congrad's on your win...Light & Love
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Date: 7/9/2011 5:39:00 PM
congrats Nette luv on another first place win with this heavenly penned piece luv..
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Date: 7/9/2011 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your no. 1 Nette. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/29/2011 5:19:00 PM
Lovely verse babe, luck in the contest, all good stuff here, xo, Don
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Date: 6/29/2011 1:34:00 PM
Very pleasing expressions creating a haven on the river side, nette
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Date: 6/29/2011 12:06:00 PM
I positively enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Nette. I hope to be back again tomorrow to read some more. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2011 9:47:00 AM
A lovely poem here.A great entry for the contest.Best wishes Nette.
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Date: 6/28/2011 11:55:00 PM
Hey, there, Nette. haven't seen you in a while.This was a really nice way to do the river contet. The last line of this is so precious. coral refrain is a lovely turn of phrase. WE;l I hope you are having a good week
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Date: 6/28/2011 11:10:00 PM
Very pretty Nette. Good luck in the contest. It should do well. Thank you for your kind remarks. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/28/2011 9:24:00 PM
Well done, Nette! Good luck in the contest! Best wishes, Caroline.
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