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A deep apricot sun rises Revealing brush strokes white Wind swept clouds so light and airy Beautiful for my sight Like a painting on fine canvas Is the scene in my view Only it is constantly changing And changes not a few God the master painter does work His gift to me each day Thank You for each awesome sunrise And allowing me to stay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/25/2015 7:55:00 AM
Sara, you have painted a great picture in words. Atta girl!
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Date: 7/24/2015 10:57:00 AM
This is beautiful Sara, just flows and flows,,,and the last line an absolute knock out.
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Date: 7/23/2015 10:39:00 PM
Sara, I love the apricot sunrise so sweet!!! You know when I read your poems, you soothe me and bring me in unison with nature and to add more you made me remember how good is God in creating this earth!! ~Olive Eloisa =')
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Date: 7/22/2015 9:47:00 PM
Sunrise,sunset and Nature's beauty captured are my favorite topics. The spiritual aspect you added made this complete, masterpiece itself my friend.
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Date: 7/21/2015 7:11:00 PM
simply beautiful, Sara. Love those kinds of sunrises.
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Date: 7/21/2015 3:46:00 PM
What a beautiful scene...we just have to open our eyes to see all His beauty
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Date: 7/21/2015 3:07:00 PM
Sara, you have penned a beautiful picture with words 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, Senryu 13
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Date: 7/21/2015 12:50:00 PM
expressionistic style, sara.. vivid canvas of nature saluting Creator's hand!.. huggs
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Date: 7/21/2015 12:21:00 PM
A beautiful, inspiring write, Sara! I enjoyed reading this beauty! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/21/2015 9:36:00 AM
Jehovah's gift He shared with you, and you are His great Steward sharing this splendor with us all ! Wonderful share dear poet ! I thank you....have a wonderful week Sara....much love, james
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Date: 7/21/2015 9:35:00 AM
I like the "apricot sun" and the constantly changing canvas. You certainly know how to express your gratitude, Sara. 7 and hugs!
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Date: 7/21/2015 9:00:00 AM
Ooo!! I love this poem, what you composed it on. Excellent.......A.M.
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