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Bruises and Lace

She walks to school draped in bruises and lace, Hiding her secret pain. Crying out in every way slipping grades, fights every day, Hoping her cries would be seen. They all wonder but never ask, guessing at what she's holding back choosing to looking the other way. Till one day, she doesn't come back too broken to move. Late at night she cries out split lip; her eyes swollen shut a few bruised broken ribs. When help finally comes, it's already too late she had slipped away. A fragile soul caught up in a torrent drugs, hate and rage. Now they all mourn wondering what more could have been done. Years pass by memories fade now nothing remains of an angels broken fate.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/10/2014 8:42:00 AM
I really like this, excellent job
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Date: 5/6/2014 1:07:00 PM
touching write Amanda,,,felt the pain in your words,,this is deep,,,
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Date: 4/23/2014 6:17:00 AM
"Bruises and Lace", wow, what a powerful image you produced. Brilliantly written poem. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/21/2014 10:39:00 PM
So well written congrats ....Seren
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Date: 4/21/2014 6:39:00 PM
Amanda, , Loved how you extracted this one away. Congratulations, this is a great win, for such a painful and realistic theme, when writing about this topic, In which phantom's around Abused Women. Have a nice day:) ~LINDA
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Date: 4/21/2014 4:39:00 PM
Thank you for entering the contest, Amanda and congratulations on your placement. I love the way you show that this girl was "Crying out in every way" but no one wished to hear her; and, then, they wonder "what more could have been done". In a very real way, our response to the abused (or non-response) simply enables the abuser. Your last verse, sadly sums it up - "memories fade", "nothing remains" - all of which allows it to happen again to the next angel. Sad. Joe
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Date: 3/22/2014 10:09:00 AM
Some stories someone has to tell even poeticly.
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