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Brown Eyes

Brown eyes that matched her hair
Sad and unhappy as she stood there
Waiting for her love to return, maybe yes
maybe never, only time will tell
Such sad brown eyes that matched her hair
Tied from behind in the most romantic way
Head slightly tilted gazing down in despair
Looking, but not looking staring into space
Memories, dancing inside her head
As she spoke silently “He promised to return” 
Talking to herself said… “I had to believe
What am I to do this is just my grief”
Time is just a lie man invented it to be wise
When two lovers are together
It doesn’t need Einstein.
He gave such a wonderful love
Love only known to a lonely heart
For what is life if not with him, I prefer to die.
Fool I am to think he will return
He’s been gone so long maybe minutes
maybe days.

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  1. Date: 2/4/2013 2:36:00 AM
    Thank you all. I am most pleased with your support! Thanks once again.

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 12:43:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning spot xx

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 12:54:00 PM
    This tugs deeply at the sad. Blessings to you and yours. Congrats on your winning spot in the contest.

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 7:23:00 PM
    Hello Ali,Congratulations on a job well done. Enjoyed the cute and beautiful baby poems. I hope you do not mind that I embraced the amusement of this contest with my 13 year old son. Always and forever ~ LINDA

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 9:06:00 PM
    My eyes are brown,,, i can view this person, as ~me~ standing in your poem... a sad awaiting ending... thank you ever so much for the nice and lovely comments... always & forever Linda...

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    Date: 1/9/2013 12:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are welcome Linda. Glad you liked it! We await that's what we do always! Hope is a wonderful bliss, it's what keeps us going. Don't you think? Have a great day and thank you for all your wonderful comments. I'm grateful to you, love Ali