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Broken Wings

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Broken Wings

Sensation of your words in their spoken place
Sincerity behind your "I will always be there".
An ear for everyone-you've no time to rest
Everyones burden you barely carry..but,
On Broken Wings

No time to heal from a past that's your present
Tho' you delight in the transition of others
Take an earnest look over the horizon
It's a new days dawning- Heal thyself
Of Broken Wings

As the eagle, stand and stretch thy wings
Shake off the things that prevent your very flight
Things that have moltened themselves to you. above all which you are acquainted
Higher than you have ever been before..Heal 
Your Broken Wings.

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  1. Date: 1/10/2012 10:02:00 PM
    'valerie, this is neat.It has the look of a rondeau!! I bet it would be great in that form as well. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 11:13:00 AM
    An enchanting poem, Sherman. I am particularly impressed by the appropriate use of Broken Wings in the concluding line of each stanza of the poem. -Mohammad

    Sherman Avatar Valerie Sherman
    Date: 1/10/2012 11:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Mohammad, your comment is appreciated
  1. Date: 1/10/2012 10:05:00 AM
    It seems we are the last ones to heal...Nice write. Thanks for sharing. Jodie Q

    Sherman Avatar Valerie Sherman
    Date: 1/10/2012 10:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You're correct Jod!e..we are, thanks