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Broken Wheel

My life and how I feel Can be aliken to a bicycle wheel Buckled punctured Deflated and crushed Discarded to a garbage dump Unwanted useless forgotten Beginning to rust. Peter Dome.copyright.2015. July.

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Tim Smith

Date: 7/10/2015 7:56:00 PM

Clean that baby up ...new spokes....shine the chrome....plenty of miles left to be ridden

Peter Dome
Date: 7/11/2015 2:52:00 AM

Trust you Tim my friend. The solution, of course why didn't I think of that. you're so kind hearted and a great guy.. Hope you are keeping well. take good care. thank you .best wishes. Pete. I feel brand new.

Anna Hopper

Date: 7/10/2015 8:10:00 AM

Hang in there friend... And keep writing! No one can take your words! Beautiful poem!

Peter Dome
Date: 7/11/2015 2:57:00 AM

Hi Anna. thank yu so much. great to hear from you. much appreciated. Take good care. my best wishes. Pete.

John Fleming

Date: 7/9/2015 2:47:00 PM

Lol! Guess we all feel like this sometime or other, Peter. All the best! :) john.

Peter Dome
Date: 7/11/2015 2:59:00 AM

Thank you John, so true, we all feel like this at sometime. Feel much better now. So kind of you to stop by. take good care. my best wishes. Pete.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/9/2015 11:06:00 AM

guess you need pumping up Peter:-) hugs jan x

Peter Dome
Date: 7/9/2015 12:14:00 PM

Certainly do, need to fix the puncture first. thank you Jan. hope you are ok. my best wishes. Pete.