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Broken Soul

You've caused me, so many tears That our home Is flooded You stepped on me, so many times That my heart Is flat You have lied to me, so many times That my soul Is broken

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Susan Mills

Date: 4/6/2019 10:15:00 AM

Original! Good luck!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/15/2013 11:15:00 AM

This is heartfelt and very touching, Smile there is always a new tomorrow. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 6/23/2013 1:35:00 PM

A very heartfelt poem. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla

Edward Orozco

Date: 12/11/2012 8:52:00 AM

Very sad write but still beautiful verse! - ed

Michael Todd

Date: 11/11/2012 11:57:00 AM

Very powerful and so concise. I have felt this before also.

Kelly Zakerski

Date: 11/7/2012 3:54:00 AM

Awesome Poem! Thank you also for choosing my poem for 1st place win in your contest. It truly means alot to me. You are a wonderful poet. Thanks again!