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The truth only hurts when it should. still needs work/ I  will get around to it- I promise!

Broken Promises They say that a promise is A comfort to a fool. To a child a broken promise is the biggest disappointment they will ever experience so do not make promises to them that you don't intend to keep. To a lover a broken promise is a trust gone astray! To a mother from a child- its many nights without sleep. From a nation to its people- Another Political trick. To a soldier longing for home It's his life being spent. But that promise you made between yourself and your creator - Seems be the hardest one to keep. When promises made too self are broken you've dug a hole too deep. Those are the worse of days- You have tuned God's channels out . You think that you are in control- And soon realize you're not. Yet, promises made daily ‘’to self’’ are USUALLY FIRST- then -quickly forgotten. THESE Are the only promises that could have saved your life. If only your promises to self you were determined to keep. Maybe THEN I WOULD TRUST THE PROMISES MADE TO ME. Please do not comfort me with your empty words, When it's only your self you want to serve. Why, make a fool of me, yourself- and everyone else? PLEDGING obligations that you cannot meet. You had no intentions of pleasing anyone but yourself. Another broken promise - You never got around to. Another poem written- in shades of blue. Another night without sleep. Another promise, you failed to keep. Copyright © Vicki Acquah | Year Posted 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/12/2015 9:31:00 PM
Hi Vicki, I am SO glad you posted a blog, otherwise I may have missed pearls such as this one. I've only been on this site for two months so I have lots of reading to do and I'll be busy many of your writes. Thank you for sharing your talent. ~ Lin ~
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Date: 10/19/2013 7:59:00 PM
Vicki, I enjoyed reading broken promises. Makes great sense! (:v Jenish.
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Date: 10/19/2013 7:14:00 PM
Very thought provoking and well expressed. I appreciate your writing style.
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Date: 10/17/2013 6:04:00 AM
Nice write on trust and promises, inspiring one, Vicki
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