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Broken Promise

A broken promise Opens the door The shade has lifted You're hiding no more. You both vowed to carry Both gave your sign Many hearts you have broken And one of them mine. I thought I knew you You're not who I thought You changed the words Real love can't be bought. A broken promise A broken vow Someday I may forgive you But I just can't right now.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/9/2014 10:12:00 AM
WONDERFUL WIN BECKY...LINDA
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Date: 6/8/2014 11:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win ! :) Wishes---
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Date: 6/7/2014 5:18:00 PM
I don't blame you; forgiveness takes time to set in, even if we try hard to do so. Congrats on your win. // paul
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Date: 6/7/2014 11:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/7/2014 9:19:00 AM
Amazing win....Skat
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Date: 6/7/2014 6:54:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win in the contest Just Write, Becky
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Date: 6/7/2014 6:03:00 AM
Broken promises are difficult to get by! Well done!
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