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Broken Pieces Fall

~~~ broken pieces fall shattered and scattered about a reflection gone ~~~ lost images fade as shadows pour and cover just a memory ~~~

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/8/2012 7:08:00 PM

One more before I wonder off... how about that concrete image of faded memories. Great senryu. It was nice stopping by... xox~pd

Dinda Minardi

Date: 4/23/2012 8:59:00 AM

Memories, so many of them only the deepests stay! I acknowledge you've published your second book, Michael. Congratulations!!! hugs, Dinda.

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/21/2012 12:20:00 PM

So many images jumping out at me while reading this one MJF! Enjoyed this tonight! Love Wilma

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 4/18/2012 1:24:00 PM

This can be see in many different interpretations very nicely done! Laura :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/17/2012 7:28:00 AM

oh as for your senyru-- this is a very visual one for me, I can't help but imagine this, and hoping that some Great puzzle maker can piece them all together-- but ah that second one gives it some sort of peace for me, just a memory.... Maligayang Bati (Happy birthday in Filipino)! :D

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/17/2012 7:27:00 AM

Happy birthday to you, Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday, dearest Michael!!! Happy Birthday to you!! ^_^ I couldn't Not drop by to greet you a very warm and smiley happy birthday! I think I still made it, right? Save me a piece of birthday cake, ok? Wishing you more success, and more happiness with Rosanna! Continue surrounding yourself in love. and spreading that love! Birthday hugs to you!! ^_^!

Diana-Marie Bombardieri

Date: 4/16/2012 11:36:00 AM

This is a really good little write:) I like the story these words tell.

Diana Mohammed

Date: 4/15/2012 1:29:00 PM

It's a lovely write... Haunting..Thanks Michael! And thanks for your comments!... Love Diana

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/15/2012 10:39:00 AM

Well done, Michael, loved and enjoyed the nice images of memory, loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/15/2012 7:13:00 AM

Like it Michael. - Have a nice birthday!!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/15/2012 6:59:00 AM

an amazing portrait of phenomenal word play Michael luv.. every line draws a picture of intensity from your gifted pen and thought process luv..another Michael moment for thre JG of yours to be in poetic mode luv.. making it a new fav ..but they all are to me.. xoxo forever..