Home » Poems » Verliza Gajeles » Broken Pieces

Broken Pieces

Dawn starts to break With the tears in my eyes Thinking of you all night Makes me realized What I felt for you Makes my world fall apart 'Coz I know you can't be mine. You treated me as someone special You showed me love and care But I fooled myself to believe you love me 'Coz I know we can't be more than friends. I know it's not just admiration I know it is real love But I have to fight this feelings 'Coz I know it is not right.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Skat A

Date: 7/20/2015 10:49:00 PM

This is deep Verliza, I like the way you are honest to yourself. However, you need to think postive, and make him yours... SKAT

Verliza Gajeles
Date: 7/21/2015 12:30:00 AM

Thank you for visiting my poem SKAT :) i made that poem way back when I was still suffering broken hearts :) Some of my poems are based on my feelings and myself. :) - Verliza

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 7/20/2015 4:35:00 AM

Sense and sensibility in some verses of good hope, where my ship got along, near and nearer to see the shinning tears of love.Smile.

Verliza Gajeles
Date: 7/20/2015 6:28:00 AM

Thank you for reading my poem. Smile Ovidiu :)