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Broken Melody

it's the midnight hour as i watch the rise and fall of your breath blend in peerless harmony within the cicada's song i twirl along in secluded mind where thoughts fall faded like shadows beneath moon's lambent light remembrance comes in winded breaths as i recall the camber of your body pressed against mine in the soft melodies of nighttide the endless tempo with bated breaths in stepless dances between young lovers the smile with the glow of a thousand stars gleaming back in brilliance now paling in fragmented flickers of clouded mind the chirr of bed as you shift closer to the edge leaves me wondering is this love enough to keep me grounded in the distance laid between us

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Date: 2/7/2020 1:34:00 AM
Sandra, someday I shall hope to write a line as elegant as "gleaming back in brilliance now paling in fragmented flickers of clouded mind". If I ever do, I will feel as if I have arrived! Your words always sing to me. Also, I love the word lambent. Thank you, and congrats on your win. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 2/7/2020 10:01:00 AM
wow, thank you for such a wonderful comment John...lambent is one of my favorite words...just something magical about it :) hugs
Date: 2/3/2020 4:49:00 PM
Congrats on your win in this Contest Sandy. Your talent shines beautifully in this and every thing you do.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/3/2020 6:48:00 PM
Thank you so much Chris :) hugs
Date: 2/3/2020 4:25:00 AM
Another first place for you--good to see your gifted poetry honored, Sandy. Congrats!
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Date: 2/3/2020 10:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay for your kind words :) hugs
Date: 2/3/2020 12:00:00 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your first place win. A beautiful cascading melody.
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Date: 2/3/2020 10:23:00 AM
Thank you kindly Subimal :)
Date: 2/2/2020 10:07:00 PM
Sandy, Congratulations on your top placement! I really like the movement of this piece leaving us with a question - wondering like you!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/3/2020 10:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Sam... hugs
Date: 9/18/2019 6:09:00 PM
Congrats Sandy enjoyed this write!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/18/2019 7:05:00 PM
Thank you John...my muse has been active these days :) hugs
Date: 9/17/2019 3:03:00 PM
Sandra congratulations on your win
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/17/2019 3:34:00 PM
Thank you so much :) hugs
Date: 9/14/2019 11:47:00 PM
Lovely poem... so much thought. Congratulations and blessings
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/15/2019 5:36:00 PM
Thank you Regina :)
Date: 9/14/2019 2:43:00 PM
- Congratulations, Sandra :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/14/2019 6:41:00 PM
Thank you my friend, enjoy your weekend :) hugs
Date: 9/14/2019 12:05:00 PM
Distance is always difficult, and it affects love.. deep and emotive poetry as always.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 9/14/2019 12:59:00 PM
Thank you for the placement and hosting another brilliant contest~ :) hugs
Date: 9/14/2019 11:21:00 AM
Congrats Sandy on your podium win..in my mind your poems are ranked #1.
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Date: 9/14/2019 12:58:00 PM
Thank you my friend....your kind words always brighten my day :) hugs
Date: 9/10/2019 12:41:00 PM
I think that many people feel this way at times; is love enough? A common enough question, beautifully penned. Reads quite smoothly.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/11/2019 9:13:00 AM
Thank you M.L., i think everyone questions a distance between them every now and then :) hugs
Date: 9/10/2019 3:33:00 AM
When I read this poem I think that this is showing what true love feels like.
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Date: 9/10/2019 5:38:00 AM
Awww thanks Caren :) hugs
Date: 9/9/2019 8:49:00 PM
Sandra.. you make misery feel so delightfully delicious and I love being left with a question... brilliant!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/9/2019 9:25:00 PM
Thank you Lyric this was a fun write. Although most of silent ones contests are good :) hugs
Date: 9/9/2019 1:52:00 PM
Is love enough (?) ... it is important with love, but not love alone ... love is a feeling ... a good feeling - but love is much more than you thought possible, just because love is about contact and positive reverberation - A melody that can be played over and over again - Let love blossom, Sanda ... turn on the music :) - A beautiful poem :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/9/2019 5:01:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise...i love when the music plays, some relationships when the music stops so does the communication, some situations, like abuse, loving someone is not enough, some love is worth saving, not all :) hugs
Date: 9/9/2019 1:05:00 PM
Brilliant piece of writing with an amazingly powerful ending... whew.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/9/2019 4:58:00 PM
thank you for your visit and comment
Date: 9/9/2019 12:12:00 PM
Such a sad feeling poem this morning. What once was is now only a memory of times spent before. Those late night giggles have now turned to sleepless thoughts. The emotions in this flow so heavily. How can a broken melody sing so sweetly? Incredibly beautiful Sandy
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/9/2019 12:44:00 PM
Thank you Chris this one consumed almost my whole break trying to get it to fall just right :) hugs
Date: 9/9/2019 12:08:00 PM
Vijay said it best! Gorgeous my dear Simply gorgeous! And sure to take a top win;)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/9/2019 8:34:00 PM
My pleasure Sandy it is so very gorgeous!;)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/9/2019 12:11:00 PM
Thank you so much Brenda for your vote of confidence on this one :) hugs
Date: 9/9/2019 11:49:00 AM
I read it and read it again--each time pausing to say, WOW! Your poems are so well written, Sandy. Of course, a TOP win for you.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/9/2019 11:53:00 AM
Thank you my friend, your kind words always brighten my day... the contest was filling fast so i had to concentrate on a write today.... hugs :)

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