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Broken Me

Broken Me One last tear That fell like a song I learnt from you You walked away Leaving those words behind Let me breathe slower In the melody hidden within For my striken heart aches Stuck to the notes frame Rolling, running, turning Through the same chords As if lost in icy lands Left to be frozen in the wild Hurling within floating eons That we shared running to one another For our essence was numb Without warmth of our inordinate love All the soft tales of lost time Holds the last tear The love found to be lost That whispers your name And vignettes of broken me 04/01/2019

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Date: 2/7/2019 3:27:00 AM
- Purbasha, congratulations on your great winning poem ... writing about tears is a sensitive theme :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Purbasha Roy
Date: 2/7/2019 3:29:00 AM
Yes , truly tears are delicate .
Date: 2/6/2019 8:52:00 PM
Lovely first two lines! Congratulations on your win!
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Purbasha Roy
Date: 2/6/2019 9:31:00 PM
Thank you for your appreciation and wishes.
Date: 2/6/2019 1:17:00 PM
very deep and emotive poem.. expressed so poetically.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Purbasha Roy
Date: 2/6/2019 7:51:00 PM
Thank you for the placement.

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