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''Broken Light''

~Why will your love never be true?
Such an absent silence.
Wearing a heart I can see right through.
An emotionless ploy.
Faint face,as eyes that were always dim.
I remember now,the smile that was forever saved for you.
But, no return, left lonely.
I turned away from our broken light.~

This is for children who has felt abandoned by parents~

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  1. Date: 4/15/2012 3:21:00 PM
    I like this Kacey, I hope this didn`t happen to you! xoxo Laila

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 3:36:00 PM
    Well done Kacey,touching and strong poem. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 12:15:00 PM
    Hey Kacey hope you enter my latest contest..David

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 8:41:00 PM
    Powerful write Kacey....I was also made to feel that my poem 'Painstaking Views' .....Hugs

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 6:27:00 PM
    Oh how sad. I hope this didn't happen to you. Thank you for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 2:08:00 PM
    a gut wrenching yet beautiful piece with stunning emotional appeal, kacey.. may all children be loved!... so well done!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 1:49:00 PM
    Very strong words - great...........George

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 1:49:00 PM
    Kacey I like this, it is strong and speaks hard true words, I am one of those children, thanks for your comments, have a great weekend ...David