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Broken hearts

A few years back I thought I had the whole world figured out,
I was young when we met and You said you loved me,
 As you called me an Angel that fell In to your life from the sky
But it must of all been a lie,
Because now I have a broken heart for the rest of my life,
We had a baby girl,
She was ten pounds Born on october 6th
But once you decided you didn’t want me anymore,
You went and lied to Dss
as you told them so many lies,
making me cry when you said goodbye
You destoryed my whole world,
On june 19th 2006 you were finaly done with me ,
You were so happy that you had our baby girl,
With out me in her world,
I blame you for this broken heart,
But now that I have had a chance to restart 
I feel in love and got married again
And I know for sure he loves me,
And he has helped set me free,
From all your painful memories,
Sometimes I cant help but start wondering,
What if my broken heart was never healed,
What if I never had that baby girl,
What if I never met you,
Would I still have gone threw this broken heart

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  1. Date: 7/5/2012 4:21:00 AM
    heartfelt write, my friend - I was sad to read below that it's not fiction. Congrats on all your wins : )

    Kostman Avatar Jane Kostman
    Date: 7/5/2012 12:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for you comment..yes it is sad but it made me a stronger person
  1. Date: 7/3/2012 6:29:00 AM
    This is really sad, Jane. Is it true, and you lost that little daughter of yours? So sad!!! And good entry for broken heart contest!

    Kostman Avatar Jane Kostman
    Date: 7/3/2012 5:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes it is true. I was young when I met my first husband, and he felt out of love with me and decided that he was going to rip my heart out and lie to dss. I talk to my daughter on the phone now... its kinda scary the whole situation. He changed I think, It sounds that way. But atleast I am able to have a part in her life now. I wish you a happy fourth and hope to see you around more! Jane
  1. Date: 7/2/2012 4:34:00 PM
    Thnx for the comments..The question at the end of this poem gives it a fine twist..wellpenned..:) Jag

    Kostman Avatar Jane Kostman
    Date: 7/3/2012 5:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thaank you for your comment!