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broken heart

My heart broke as she went away,
to a place where there was no way.
I went in search of her,but she was nowhere.
I cried day and night,
as she had gone away .
First i thought i was a burden on her,
but later came to know she was suffering through CANCER.
Before she left she wrote a letter and sent it to me,
And in that was something really HEARTBREAKING,It was written that:
My heart has got two holes which i made on my own,
and one of them is for you my friend and the other for 
our friendship which can never break if you or me leave this world.
It will forever remain the same.These two holes i'm sending to you as a sign 
of our friendship.GOOD BYE!!!!!!
And after this she left me and went.
when i received it i had gone for her funeral.
I couldn't say anything as she left me and went.


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  1. Date: 12/26/2013 4:03:00 AM
    Oh so sad:( Keep in mind there will be a resurrection! (John 5:28,29)

  1. Date: 12/25/2013 1:32:00 PM
    Hello young Mahima, glad you stopped by. Thank you for sharing this poem. It is sad, .... You write very good, .. You have a way of expressing emotions one can grasp on.... Wishing you a nice Christmas Cheers... xox..LINDA

    Date: 12/26/2013 4:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for reading my poem and complementing it like you always do really a very big thanks to you friend
  1. Date: 12/20/2013 1:42:00 PM
    Oh such a touching poem. Frm real life? U related it so splendid! Sory for yor loss. And tnx for yor comnt

  1. Date: 12/20/2013 12:21:00 PM
    - A very sad poem, Mahima ! - Greetings to you from Norway: Wish you and everyone you love a enjoyable Christmas. - I hope the year 2014 will be a lovely and peaceful year. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 10:13:00 PM
    my gosh, this is such a sad poem. If it is true, I feel sorry for your pain!