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Broken Glass

Standing there
Looking at the glass
Seeing myself
Look back at me
In little shards
Of glass
I look closer
And see a girl
That is crying
And looks like
She is in so much pain
Then I see her
Killing herself
I back away
Frightened at what I saw
And look back
She is in the act
Of commiting suicide
I do not want to watch
This anymore
So I bring up my fist
And hit the glass
Then I wonder
Why do I look
Into this mirror
Of broken glass

Copyright © Allison Unknown

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  1. Date: 12/15/2009 2:14:00 PM
    well scripted. this hits home for me. thank you for sharing your very articulate and heartfelt mind with us here at the Soup. i enjoyed reading this.

  1. Date: 12/12/2009 5:08:00 PM
    You express yourself well,Allison. Keep on writing and let it out. I'll say one for you.-Robert.

  1. Date: 12/12/2009 2:00:00 PM
    a strange sad poem, please keep sharing your feelings. i'll try to help you if i can. ------Ell