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Broken Glass

Standing there Looking at the glass Seeing myself Look back at me In little shards Of glass I look closer And see a girl That is crying And looks like She is in so much pain Then I see her Killing herself I back away Frightened at what I saw And look back She is in the act Of commiting suicide I do not want to watch This anymore So I bring up my fist And hit the glass Then I wonder Why do I look Into this mirror Of broken glass

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/15/2009 2:14:00 PM
well scripted. this hits home for me. thank you for sharing your very articulate and heartfelt mind with us here at the Soup. i enjoyed reading this.
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Date: 12/12/2009 5:08:00 PM
You express yourself well,Allison. Keep on writing and let it out. I'll say one for you.-Robert.
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Date: 12/12/2009 2:00:00 PM
a strange sad poem, please keep sharing your feelings. i'll try to help you if i can. ------Ell
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