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Broken English

He speaks in broken English; It's interesting to see my language this way- Spread out like pieces of shattered ceramic, The edge of each word tossing off glints of meaning Like bits of light, illumination; a kaleidoscope Of light or sound dancing in the air before his lips... At times he seems embarrassed, pausing before he speaks, Like the boy who tipped over his mother's favorite vase- He knows how I love words- and scrambles to piece back Together the fragmented ideas, hoping the cracks might Be overlooked; the result of his efforts is often unconventional, And yet... impossibly lovely too... It's a picture puzzle of a lonely landscape rearranged into a flower It's a mosaic; the pieces don't have to fit to make the image radiant It's a kintsukuroi bowl, the language veined through with gilded passion, More beautiful for having been broken

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/11/2019 9:26:00 AM
I am going through my favourite pieces and got to enjoy this one again.
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Date: 1/18/2014 9:06:00 AM
Of all the pieces I have read so far this is my absolute favorite. What an exceptional write. Congratulations! Adding to favorites.
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Date: 1/17/2014 8:53:00 PM
Great write and imagery, congrats on the fine win, Cameron
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Date: 1/17/2014 7:20:00 PM
Wonderful imagery of how broken language can seem poetic at times, like a child's. I like where you took the concept. Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 1/14/2014 6:15:00 PM
Great poem, Cameron. Deeply expressed emotion in this amazing piece. Pure talent written in this piece. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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