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Broken Dream

On the edge of twilight's dawn, I'm alone Casting dark shadows in the blackest night Filled with deep regrets I cannot atone Searching for a hint of the pale moonlight Sharp pain filled with bitter longing my heart Aches with poison's cure deathly remedy Wounded from piercing hole of silver dart Mind and soul cursed to suffer endlessly Wandering helplessly in shrouded mind Trapped in eternal darkness feeling numb Despising myself for being so blind To not see then what you've made me become The day you've left is when I've died within A broken dream of what has never been

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2016 1:21:00 AM

nice to see this one again Mi Bui, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 8/28/2015 7:02:00 PM

Nice to read you again... SKAT

David Williams

Date: 2/23/2014 4:22:00 PM

Mi a big welcome, a great sonnet...David

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/18/2014 8:16:00 PM

Mi, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join the soup March 2010. You will find many friendly poets, who ready to take you under the their wings, and support and offer any kind of feedback. I will be around to help you grow with the community, if you like. I look forward to meeting and reading any poems or smiles you offer. :) :) :) We are one big happy family. (Drama & Love) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/13/2014 4:20:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Mi- I choose your first moving written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 2/12/2014 4:15:00 PM

Mi Bui, wow, deep and shattering. , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT