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Broken Dream

light endeavors burn dream a broken dream ..lost fire ? believe ..keep up faith !

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/20/2012 4:09:00 AM

Very profound message-CHARMA

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/23/2010 11:50:00 AM

Interesting and encouraging thoughts that you have penned here in this one...Keep up the creative writing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work.. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/22/2010 11:52:00 AM

I have been reading some wonderful poetry today here at the Soup. I am so happy your poetry is among those I have read Marcus. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/21/2010 5:18:00 PM

Marcus, thanks for supporting my contest...Raul

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/21/2010 4:11:00 PM

Inspirational nice conclusion...Raul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/21/2010 3:33:00 PM

Well done have, enjoyed have a nice one..p.d.