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Broken Down

Broken down into pieces, Drowned by this love, Straighten out my creases, Fooled by words so unsatisfied, Shared a love but every word you lied. Oh how I was an empty shell, Submerged in love, Yet still put through hell. A love once gained. You threw away, Everyday it rained, In my heart it poured, A love once in my veins ran pure, Strange how quick love turns raw. I should never have built trust, In a love purely built on lust, And now you’ve gone, Sweet sensation remains in my blood, Just a woman who’s misunderstood.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/15/2010 1:41:00 PM
Wonderful poetry Nicola >> James
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