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Broken Beyond Amend

I plea only to be ignored, my clock froze to my pain Its hands will turn no more Pardon me, forgive my dry pen that impedes my heart to speak A poet am I? A pen with no ink, I am hollow and I write to my shadow Her strokes dry, and with every creation I awake Lines of love, O' lines of tragedy sing to me that I may hear and tune Will the earthquakes kill me and drown me in history I will live even after death herself wins the race that we all lose Read my art, as I bleed broken beyond amend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/1/2009 10:19:00 PM
Wow, very deep and beautiful!
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Date: 11/29/2009 11:33:00 PM
that was beautiful. Interisting that you personify death as "her", i have always seen it as masculine but I like the the allegory of female love and pain. thank you for your comment, I love them.
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Date: 11/28/2009 8:06:00 PM
Hi Ed it is hard to ignore someone who is truely gifted and blessed like you are, so please continue writing and keep your pen flowing for you will touch the hearts of many with your gift and your talents in poetry, Thank you for stopping by and leaving a critique they are always appreciated,God bless you always, Dean
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Date: 11/28/2009 9:31:00 AM
Have a beautiful weekend and thank you for posting your awesome poetry here for us to read Eduardo. Love,Carol
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Date: 11/27/2009 9:22:00 PM
Awesome, increditible
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