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Broken Angel

With her head held low I can see her pain within Her broken wings lay shattered She suffers with your sin She has tried to help you And lead you drom temptation This one last sin To which there is no redemption It's not just your soul that has gone You've taken her's as well Learn to love again Believe in yourself and leave your hell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/25/2016 6:29:00 PM
SHARON, Excellent written poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **
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Date: 8/15/2008 11:40:00 PM
Dear Sharon, This excellent personification has won an honorable mention in my contest. Please forward your mailing address to: elaine.george@sympatico.ca and I will send your certificate of poetic excellence from MemorElaine Publishing House. CONGRATULATIONS! Love and best wishes, lainie
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Date: 8/15/2008 7:30:00 AM
Congratulations Sharon on your Honorable Mention in Elaine's Personification contest. Well done. Love, Shar
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