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Broken and Tore

I really love you But you love someone else when i see you I Cant close my eyes I Just want you to say how much you care about me But you love someone else I just want to hear "i love you" out of your mouth I hear it in my mind Its just like a sound But its just a dream Because you love someone else

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/10/2012 1:05:00 PM
enjoyed reading this today brandon. hope to read more in the near future:)
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Date: 3/10/2012 12:09:00 PM
Nice poem, i enjoyed reading it, I especially like the verses I just want to hear "I love you" out of your mouth, this can mean so much to a lover who really needs to just hear it come from someone he or she loves, Keep writing (smile)
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Date: 3/10/2012 11:50:00 AM
Brandon it is sweet......and touching...She love someone else Brandon !!! - oxox Anne-Lise
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