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Broken and Cracked

I'm Breaking.. bent too far Hands on my throat Bloody ugly scars Lines on my wrists Bullets in my heart Watch the walls crumble Feel the floor come apart I'm Falling.. Smacking the ground A sickening crack A deafening sound Took one step And another too far Now I've hit the pavement And I hit it hard I'm dying.. Bleeding through my soul Where unfaithfulness Has taken a fatal toll Look up to the stars This time should be my last My memories start to fade And I become the past

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/27/2015 10:54:00 PM
Melissa, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/26/2015 12:36:00 PM
MELISSA, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 3/25/2015 2:44:00 PM
I feel you Melissa. You are not alone...hugs Tim
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Date: 3/25/2015 9:53:00 AM
Broken and cracked..oh your pain, It too shall fade and become your past. Broken and cracked to bring you back. Welcome to the Soup. Enjoyed. Much Love
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Date: 3/25/2015 4:10:00 AM
you sure got a lot of emotions to get out, and you did so awesome at it,
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Date: 3/25/2015 2:30:00 AM
Powerful pen Melissa! Very dark and deep thanks for sharing it. A 7 from me! Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you!:) D.
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