Broken

Arch Patel 12/16/13 Broken I feel broken inside My body aches My heart bleeds My past mistakes crush me My tears fall like Niagara Falls I’m left here all alone With no one on my side No one seems to care You’re the only one I had Now I am broken inside I’m alone in my world Nowhere to go Nowhere to hide Here I lie Broken inside

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Skat A

Date: 12/26/2013 12:43:00 AM

Arch, , Hope you are enjoying the holidays, -- Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/19/2013 1:18:00 PM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Arch ! - A sad poem. - Nice to read your first poem here.:)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/19/2013 12:46:00 PM

Arch, i know this very feeling...love this poem...,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@