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Written August 22, 2023
For Contest, “Beautiful or Broken”
Sponsor, Constance La France

Our circle of friends is now broken; the changes it's made are unspoken. From twelve to five- now just a token; our circle of friends is now broken. Each year, one or two of them- leaving to move away- kinfolk receiving. Some- too ill for outings- home cleaving; and others in Heaven- we're grieving. Our circle is broken- despairing- so missing the unified caring. Those left behind- slowly repairing to do our best- changes forbearing. Our circle of friends is now broken; now leaving those left so heartbroken. Our fun dates are empty- not open; our circle of friends is now broken.

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Date: 9/11/2023 12:05:00 AM
Sandra, excellent poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I like the quote image too, Constance
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Date: 8/23/2023 1:23:00 AM
It’s so sorrowful when the circle of friends is broken, a sad though a beautiful poem… Belle
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