Broken

Broken heart Falling apart All the tears And the fears Looking forward Not looking back Seeing destruciton on my track Happy today Sad tomorrow Living life till tomorrow

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Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 7/17/2009 4:47:00 PM

great piece! congrats!

Tracey Kraft

Date: 7/15/2009 7:14:00 PM

nice write

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/15/2009 3:37:00 AM

Nice Rhyme . Congratulations on being featured this week. Sara

Raul Moreno

Date: 7/14/2009 2:14:00 PM

Megan, congrats on your feature...Raul

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2009 4:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Megan. Love, Carol

Jayne Eggins

Date: 7/12/2009 10:59:00 PM

Beautiful I loved it congrates on your piece being featured this week ... Jayne x x

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 7/12/2009 7:11:00 PM

Wow Megan! Your piece... Great flow of words, this is a very passionate piece. Congrats on your awesome poem being featured this week. You are an incredible poet, please keep writing. Best wishes with your writings. Adeleke

James Fraser

Date: 5/5/2009 1:56:00 PM

What a lovely poem, nice write, James

Emily Kroeger

Date: 4/12/2009 12:33:00 AM

awwwwww....