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Bring On the Rain

There are places that I've been that you may never see As the steady winds are blowing this storm brews inside of me But the strong hand that guides me will surely see me through As I walk within this darkness There is nothing left to do I see the storm clouds gather as the thunder starts to roll Lightening flashes all around as the droplets flood my soul But when the rain has ended the sun will shine once more and I will then be stronger than I ever was before So bring on the rain let me cry these lonely tears and release the pain As the lightening strikes this heart cries out again I won't give in... bring on the rain As everything around me rages onto my knees I fall I cry out in desperation "God help me through it all" Then this fury deep inside me slowly starts to drift away Though a steady rain is falling I know I'll be okay So bring on the rain let me cry these lonely tears and release the pain As the lightening strikes this heart cries out again I won't give in... bring on the rain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/20/2009 7:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 9/19/2009 2:02:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words. God does help us through the tough times if we let him. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 9/15/2009 7:26:00 PM
Alana - - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 9/15/2009 7:26:00 PM
Alana - - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 9/15/2009 11:37:00 AM
I love the last seven lines - outstanding, heartwrenching. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/15/2009 7:47:00 AM
Congratulations on this amazing poem being featured this week, Alana.. a poem from the heart! ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/15/2009 1:27:00 AM
Alana, congrats on having your work featured...Raul
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Date: 9/14/2009 4:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Alana. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/14/2009 12:24:00 AM
Congrats on your featured poem this week Alana.Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/12/2009 6:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals Alana. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2009 9:58:00 PM
Alana, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/1/2009 9:18:00 PM
Dear Alana, Wonderful writing! Best wishes to you in the final round. Lainie
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Date: 3/31/2009 7:02:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/31/2009 2:19:00 AM
Congrats on your success in the PS contest.Best wishes for the next round Alana.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/30/2009 3:55:00 PM
Congratulations on this beautiful poem being selected for the next round. Well done and best wishes for the finals. Love Heidie
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Date: 8/28/2008 6:09:00 AM
This is so lyrical a read. The imagery zlets us witness the strength you possess through life's storms. Wonderful! Michael
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