Brilliance

Blowing in the wind Rarely touching ground Intend on sparkling Lifting souls through clouds Longing to embrace Immortal life, found Amazing in grace Nesting in the Home Claimed by one aim Ever to breathe Love. By CarolineCécile Copyright © 04.29.11

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The Fringe

Date: 4/29/2011 9:28:00 PM

Quite a visual of an immortal soul. good write.

James Foulk

Date: 4/29/2011 2:07:00 PM

a very wonderful piece you wrote, so beautiful, really enjoyed reading it. thank you for commenting on He carried his sorrow to the grave.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/29/2011 2:02:00 PM

I especially like the last two lines..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..Thanks for the intuitive review of my work..Cody's dad has an untreatable illness that leads to death..He is in the next to last stage of Huntington's Disease..He probably weights 90 lbs. and has all the abnormal movements, has trouble swallowing, gets choked but has not had aspiration pneumonia yet..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/29/2011 1:12:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Caroline. Wishing you a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. I hope the sun shines down upon you and brings joy into your heart. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/29/2011 11:28:00 AM

Beautiful word to use for your acrostic, this is very uplifting Caroline :) thank you as well for dropping by my poem, I am glad that it made you laugh :) I love to laugh :) enjoy your day :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2011 12:06:00 AM

sweet acrostic, Caroline. and "amazing in grace."

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/28/2011 1:11:00 PM

Our Lord's brilliance shines in this spiritual acrostic, Caroline. Even when times are tough, we always have a place to turn, "nesting" in the grace of His love. Very uplifting, my friend. Love, Carolyn