Brighter

As the Son gets bright Bright, brighter; Darkness slowly Fades, dissipates

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John Freeman

Date: 11/16/2009 10:31:00 AM

A Wonderful tribute to the Son of suns. Yet brighter than the fire ball we see in the sky. Beautiful piece Sara. Sincerely, love, Moses

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/14/2009 12:08:00 PM

good one

James Fraser

Date: 11/13/2009 3:25:00 PM

Kool Senyru Sara, its certainly well received going by the comments >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/13/2009 3:09:00 PM

So very true, Sara, and so profound... excellent words... as always ... thankxxx for your comments on my poetry today... also.. your tribute poem has just been posted... enjoy.... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 11/13/2009 12:45:00 PM

Lovely and true Senryu :) ~harvest being that the Aspen trees turn their colors during the months of Sept Oct, they say best viewed mid september (harvest I thought sounded good lol). Green to Gold to Reds :)

Brian Strand

Date: 11/13/2009 7:34:00 AM

One for my favourites Sara.Excellent senryu.Like the allsusion as well.Rgds Brian

P Sheart

Date: 11/13/2009 7:08:00 AM

A lovely vision Sara. Love Light Patty

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/13/2009 5:39:00 AM

The whole truth and nothing but the truth in so few words... excellent!!! Love to you, Sara. Smiling, Dane Ann