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Bright Uproar

en*L*I*G*H*T*ened babbling shocks burst out of bubbling rocks bright spots erupt over a smoldering landscape (hot inflation begets Pomp & Circumlocution) snowballs explode in a gritty paradise yellow dust smothers moaning misfits balloons hover over missing minds (Look on the BRIGHT side!) it’s simply a B*r*I*g*H*t uproar skyscraping warriors lock & load happily pull heat-seeking triggers (taking out floating bull's-eyes) Operation OMG has commenced! guided by blowback from barreling behemoths chasing mercurial probes flying with hypersonic ease (gilded ghosts pierce an overheated stratosphere)

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Date: 3/6/2023 6:24:00 PM
enjoyable read, images are like "wartime", it made me think of that, this is brilliant and thougtful, like an accelerated process, i hope i don't miss the point yann
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Date: 3/7/2023 3:40:00 AM
Thank you for your thoughtful comment. Yes, it intentionally captures some images of armed conflict.

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