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Bright Sun

it shone bright, brighter still, and the brightest, then it faded a little, and more, till it was all out, do not know where he was all night, having his fun, this poor star called sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 6/9/2009 12:21:00 PM
i love this bright sun--and recomment i will my friend--charma
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Date: 6/9/2009 11:37:00 AM
Hello, some would call your tactics spamming. It would be nice to first comment on another fellow poets work before you ask them to buy your work. Enjoyed this poetry though and will read more of you. Enjoy your day.
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Date: 6/9/2009 4:09:00 AM
If you'll buy my collection I'll buy yours LOL. Male sun..aye..yang...carouser. Good one aleezadelta@aol.com
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Date: 6/9/2009 2:45:00 AM
a great write, thanks for your comments on my poetry, I will go and check out that link on your book, so wonderful, God bles you from diane
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Date: 1/22/2009 1:35:00 AM
A unique piece... makes one wonder doesn't it? Neat concluding rhyme. Well done my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/2/2008 11:33:00 PM
hey gupta dude, amazing stuff man...keep rocking yaar!
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Date: 9/13/2008 10:18:00 AM
a lovely piece of poetry
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Date: 9/13/2008 6:25:00 AM
this is a cute piece. john
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