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Bright Streaming Contrails

bright streaming contrails dazzling streaks ascend night sky -- free world's tradition

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Kash Poet

Date: 1/10/2014 1:36:00 PM

Revisiting this beautiful senryu Carolyn.Thanks so much for visiting my page.So sad to know about your health.I frequently go back to my old poem page to read your inspiring words .Miss ya.

Kash Poet

Date: 5/29/2011 1:23:00 PM

Wonderful imagery here Carolyn...enjoyed...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/6/2010 8:27:00 AM

Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Fireworks". Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/6/2010 1:45:00 AM

congrats on your win with this one, Carolyn :)!! --nikko :)

Ray Dillard

Date: 7/5/2010 8:33:00 PM

I thought your poem was great! I really enjoyed it and thought it was one of the best! RAY

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/5/2010 1:39:00 PM

Congratulations, Carolyn and glad to see it in the top ten cicle. Lv, Andrea

Elaine George

Date: 7/5/2010 9:03:00 AM

Beautiul Senryu, Carolyn. Congratulations on your win in Dborah's contest. Love Laini

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/4/2010 3:19:00 PM

you got me smiling with this Carolyn--^_^ and that last line gives it a great perspective for the holiday :) --thanks btw for your comment on Diwata--enjoyed writing that one about the nature spirits :) -- nikko :)

Rick Parise

Date: 7/4/2010 2:44:00 PM

Enjoyed Carolyn , Thank you~Happy 4th~God bless~Rick

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/4/2010 1:51:00 PM

Love it and the images Carolyn, err can I send payment via Paypal for your water bill for my "hot summer's night" piece? :) you made me smile with your comment, love Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/4/2010 8:45:00 AM

Andrea, in high school we were the Raritan Rockets and the "Contrail" was the name of our yearbook.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2010 11:41:00 PM

Love that word contrails. Haven't seen it used before! Very nice entry, Carolyn.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/2/2010 3:44:00 PM

Yup I see what you mean in line 2 yes you are right it has only one action "ascend"...it's okies now...unless you want to make the title lower case too (duck)..nice to work with you! Hugs!

Canny Amah

Date: 7/2/2010 3:38:00 PM

... classic use of imagery ... a sure read! Canny

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/2/2010 11:58:00 AM

Just a heads up my friend, soup mail

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/2/2010 7:09:00 AM

I appreciate the last line very striking thought- Free world's tradition. Good luck in the contest