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Bright Robin

wings of bright robin gliding down on moist daisy… shy petals close tips © by nette onclaud for Sydney ~ Leann’s Sweet Flowers and Hummingbird and now, P D's Any Haiku Will Do

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/23/2013 10:59:00 AM

Ahh!!! Congrats on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2013 11:50:00 PM

One I had not seen before, and I see how well it must have fit into the sweet flowers and hummingbirds contest. Congrats on your win, Nette. It's very pretty.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/22/2013 6:46:00 PM

congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Donna Jones

Date: 7/22/2013 1:07:00 PM

So beautiful nette....congratulations on your wonderful win...

Kash Poet

Date: 7/22/2013 12:05:00 PM

Wonderful imagery in this haiku Nettie.Congrats on the win.

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/22/2013 6:56:00 AM

Nette congrats on your fine Haiku. Warm Smiles, Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/22/2013 1:18:00 AM

- A winning haiku, with great quality Nette !!- CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Tahera Mannan

Date: 7/21/2013 10:57:00 PM

So beautiful and sensual. Many congrats Nette.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/21/2013 8:15:00 PM

Nette :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA**

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/21/2013 7:26:00 PM

Congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/1/2012 8:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the "Sweet Flowers & Hummingbirds" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/25/2012 12:44:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats on your winning work...Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/25/2012 11:42:00 AM

NETTE ..Congratulations with your wonderful win,,, ... ;-) always~PD

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 4/25/2012 4:28:00 AM

Real honeymoon delight,My friend...Wonderful and beautiful set of Haikus,Nette...Congrats on your well deserved win....

Kash Poet

Date: 4/24/2012 9:58:00 PM

Congratulations Nette!Wonderful imagery here.

Skat A

Date: 4/24/2012 9:39:00 PM

congrats with your wonderful win' Siddy

Mike T

Date: 4/23/2012 6:57:00 PM

I've never read a triple haiku before, but this definitely works, carrying the action along deftly from one to the other. It reminds me of the Japanese pictures that are hung in a group of three, slightly separated -- as the line breaks demarcate each haiku. The overripe words convey a subtle eroticism. Mesmerizing.

Kash Poet

Date: 4/16/2012 10:27:00 PM

Excellent haiku by you Nette.Wonderful choice of words.Best wishes.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/16/2012 7:08:00 PM

Freaking amazing haiku triplets, Nette! Stunned with your words,,,,they make the picture more vivid! Love, Gwendolen I chose this one as my fav!

Laila Andresen Mjelde

Date: 4/16/2012 4:30:00 AM

Excellent, wonderful enjoyed your poem my friend! ;0) xoxo - Laila

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/15/2012 7:43:00 PM

immensely expressive ..luv the silky beaks Nette luv.. awesome photo. I tried to do one with no avail..oh.. good luckk.. a sure fire top noth winner luv... may be away for day or two ..health issues once again.. so....

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/15/2012 7:10:00 PM

This is simply a wonderful and terrific write my friend! This write contains amazing words that's written throughout your poem with great skill! The best stanza has to be the second one at which the description of the interlude has been identified! Awesome hummingbird enjoying a closed tip petal pollen dispenser! I thoroughly enjoyed your poem that I have read this evening! Excellent Work!!

Tim B

Date: 4/15/2012 6:54:00 PM

Lovely title, and picture Miss Nette. The flow is perfect and it rolls down the page like the flowers blowing in the wind. I do like the subtle undertones here as well, a romantic poem to be sure. Best of luck in the contest!

John Rhinem

Date: 4/15/2012 2:53:00 PM

Smile ˜ I Have Had A Couple Of Creations Hummingbirds Hovering Over & Near Myself As Of Recent ˜ To Think That Purity & Innocence Can Be Defiled By Perverted Shadows ˜ Shall They Ever Wake? ˜ Hummingbird Don't Fly Away Fly Away * Very Pretty Poem Nette ˜ Love Always, John!:) ˜

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/15/2012 1:04:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Great picture of that little hummer and beautiful flower.Thanks for stopping by..Sara