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Bridge To a Memory

Walks we took, across the bridge and down the ridge we'd climb He'd catch himself to shorten steps, while I'd be stretching mine With fields to plow, and milking cows, yet he always made the time One look beyond the bridge of time, and childhood can rewind Those summer days, soon passed away, yet love just lingers on How simple all the world seemed then, unfurled beneath the sun Together we would brew mischief, while chewing juicy gum We'd talk about most anything, and walk till the daylight dimmed I'd look to him, with questions, grand, then, he would give them thought He'd scratch his head, and often said, "I'll answer the best that I can" Then explain in words I understood, and knew that less was good "How many stars are in the sky?" ..."Well, Sugar Pie,... a lot!!" If I could choose a single day .....across the span of time... Where the sun was gold, the stream was cold, the skies were bluer blue A quiet place...his whiskered face, the grace he showed to me We'd walk our pace, across the bridge, where greener grass would grow.... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Date: 11/7/2013 10:49:00 PM
Carrie ,a beautiful winning poem. Enjoyed reading every crossing bridge win. Hugs ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 11/7/2013 10:04:00 AM
this is lovely, carrie! a very moving tribute to childhood and parenthood and a well-deserved win in the contest.
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Date: 11/7/2013 8:06:00 AM
Sweet! Congrats.
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Date: 11/7/2013 6:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot once more carrie xx
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Date: 11/6/2013 9:30:00 PM
7 - Carrie...I am taken in an utterly undone. I consider it a mark of a truthful, and well written poem when I am touched to tears. Your last stanza (the last four lines) unmanned me as I thought of Grandpa. ~CTB
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Date: 11/6/2013 9:21:00 PM
Congrats on the win in the contest of Deb, Carrie
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Date: 11/6/2013 8:09:00 PM
I feel the tenderness of your words as they massage your memory and quicken remembrances. Beautifully written.... Love ya .... Jake
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Date: 11/6/2013 6:44:00 PM
Carrie , Congratulations on your Crossing That Bridge win.... always & forever :) LINDA
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Date: 11/6/2013 11:01:00 AM
your tender piece bring luster to reveries, carrie... as always, a supreme read.. ... special cheers on your win..:) huggs
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Date: 2/16/2013 8:54:00 AM
I missed this one. You can see the images as you read. Day brightener for sure.
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Date: 6/30/2011 5:27:00 AM
A belated congratulations Carrie on your win in Brian Strand's "Let's See Poetry" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/27/2011 7:13:00 PM
congratulations, who could ever forget this one?
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Date: 6/25/2011 7:40:00 AM
What a lovely memory this presents. Much better than its placement. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/25/2011 6:59:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your HM in the contest with this dynamic entry superbly written my friend.. enjoy special honor luv..
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Date: 3/29/2011 6:21:00 PM
Carrie, you never mentioned Grandpa one time in this free verse, but that's got to be your referral. Right or wrong? That accomplishing factor in itself deserves an award. Congratulations on your worthy poem s honor in sixth place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/29/2011 12:44:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest with this lovely nostalgic write, good use of internal rhyme...
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Date: 3/29/2011 11:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie in Debbie Guzzi's contest "The Rhyme Inside". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/29/2011 10:02:00 AM
I knew this would be a winner, Carrie. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/29/2011 4:41:00 AM
Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest, Carrie
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Date: 3/28/2011 9:31:00 PM
ahhhh, this is simply awesome, Carrie. Another big fave for me. Congratulations on one of the best poems in this contest.
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Date: 3/28/2011 9:18:00 PM
Carrie - Many Congrats on big win with this superb creative write. Luv & Best wishes-Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 3/28/2011 8:54:00 PM
Carrie these are some awesome summer memories. Warm congrats for this win.
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Date: 3/28/2011 7:59:00 PM
YOu did a great job with the rhyme..congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 3/28/2011 7:42:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on another glorious winning poem in Debbie's contest my friend..an excellent entry with superb rhyme sequence.. enjoy a great win with luv...
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Date: 3/28/2011 6:46:00 PM
Oh! Carrie, this is just BEAUTIFUL. Carried me away to a better time and better place. Many congrats on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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