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Bride To Her Future Groom

I look up into your smiling eyes I see happiness I look at your stance I see a solid foundation For us to join together To be as one ...I will be your bride Dressed in virginal white (Guess our holiday together doesn't count) Our days from now on will be filled with laughter No more tears of frustration because we're apart To wake up next to your curly head of hair Will try to forget the snoring bit Ear plugs easily used, that leaves one thing Maybe I should remember my manners ...just say Please leave your socks in laundry basket. I love you my man Penned 7 September 2017 Contest: Shadow Hamilton ...Bride to Future Groom.

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Date: 10/2/2017 8:22:00 AM
love the humour here Seren lol good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/11/2017 10:35:00 PM
Great write, Seren!
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Date: 9/8/2017 9:43:00 AM
Haha good one...I don't know who you're about because I don't snore (wink)
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Date: 9/8/2017 3:33:00 AM
This is a fabulous entry into Shadow's contest! Such a delightful poem, I loved your cadence and flow of your incredible write my friend! What a fantastic piece, I truly loved reading this amazing piece this morning! Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/8/2017 3:56:00 AM
haha Russell thought i would send a different sort of poem. Not all mushy....thanks for commenting Seren

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