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Brick By Brick

She wasn’t them, But she didn’t blame him for not being able to see it; His vision was obstructed by the wall he had put up. Rejection, disappointment, and heartbreak Lined the walls that boxed in his heart. There was a time when he let his heart roam free Without fear of consequence. Until they helped him hide it all away, Brick by brick. She wondered if she would ever find a way inside that box. If she would ever find a way to knock down those walls. To see the man she knew hid behind them. To love him. The way they should have. The way she always would. The way she wished he would.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/4/2016 12:35:00 AM
Ashley Pacitti, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Date: 6/3/2016 8:18:00 AM
It is a rough place behind the bricks, you express the desire to want more very well
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Date: 6/2/2016 10:19:00 PM
Ashley, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/2/2016 9:55:00 PM
Delicately said... lovely....she would .....
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