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Brian's Song

I see a cherry without a stem, you see an iron dusted planet so where is the common ground?...an over ripened tomato? I think its time to leave.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/29/2016 11:03:00 AM
This is off-the-wall good! I love irrelevant and off-the-wall ... CayCay
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Date: 11/29/2016 7:42:00 AM
Frustration wrought with vivid images!
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