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Brewing Up Some Trouble

Smoke rings coming form the pot A brew to put you in a trance Liquid "poison" getting hot Evil eyes doing a dance Watching this special concoction Become more alive with fire Made into dangerous toxin Bubbles getting so much higher Cackle laughs are being heard With a smile as they're stirrin' You can't hear a single word Just happiness around the cauldron Simmering this mixture for hours Turns are taken to create A mixture using the powers That will seal someones fate Soon this magics finally done As this new trio of witches Cause some trouble just for fun What a group of crazy bi---es

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Date: 8/23/2014 12:35:00 AM
haha. Love the last line. I did that in mine too! I like how you broke your poetry into stanzas this time. Would like to see you do it more often in your really long poems. Those spaces between stanzas are kind of like what paragraphs are to prose and make the poem feel more organized. However, you have a unique style kind of like a rapper, who does not stop but just keeps that rhyming going. It's truly YOU, Robin, a rhyming machine!!
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