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White frost upon the hill A yellow sun rises Illuminating all Those frosty surroundings And chills bones 'pon whom it falls About all the view I could take at 30 degrees...

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Bill Baker

Date: 2/21/2024 5:40:00 PM

Good poetry, it made me shiver, Sara. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/22/2024 9:20:00 AM

Thank you, Bill. Sara

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/20/2024 3:51:00 PM

beautifully descriptive....made me shiver. No snow here all winter long; no more frost; 70 degrees here in Texas today...no more cold nights...milder days and spring is here...sigh...more than ready. I rambled, sorry. Liked yellow sun rises illuminating all those frosty surroundings. have a pleasant evening, Sara B

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/21/2024 5:42:00 AM

Sara B, no snow here either, just some heavy frost and lightly frozen birdbaths in the morning. Very cold early in the morn, but warm afternoons the last few days. Thanks for the visits, Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/20/2024 12:27:00 PM

- The frost is gone ... but, the winter has been cold ... I welcome spring now ... no more freezing bones - Well written, Sara :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/20/2024 12:55:00 PM

Awesome if your frost is gone. We had some this morning, well, it is what we call a solid frost, and it was cold, but maybe tomorrow will be a little better. It has gotten up to 64 degrees today. Thanks for dropping by. Sara K